my first post and a big hello to everyone (legend ron and reg review)

[poetrychatbore]

hello to this forum efestival. I hope you can see from my name that I like to rhyme what I am trying to say. don't worry I can communicate with out rhyming. I love to see how others see things. I will leave you with my first post on something I saw  and if you have any views on it it will be great to read them.   g2g big brother is starting soon and I love this.

 

 

legend - ron and reg - tom hardy  11.09.15

 

i will start with respect

because this film was outstanding

critically acclaimed is correct

it rightly so was landing.

ron and reg are the story

it will get under your skin

you will witness gangsters and the glory

the utter turmoil in each twin.

how they controlled london city

even took business world wide

the violence was not pretty

in odeon cinema holloway i had nowhere to hide.

ron's sexuality was a enjoy

it has no repercussions

openly admitting he does like a boy

with the americans it was the funniest of discussions.

the fight between the boys did bleed

in a full and crowed club

so much hate but never freed

these 2 when born were the same cub.

the past eventually came back to bite

this time no escape

no MP or judge with a delight

3 decades left the twins in bad shape.

tom hardy you was stunning

i double performance with no grey

i no allot of people are still gunning

but i am biased and that's why i loved you as each kray.

 

[Yoghurt on a Stick]

Edited - All a bit too harsh on reflection.

Edited September 21, 2015 by Yoghurt on a Stick

[poetrychatbore]

what do you mean ? yoghurt

[Yoghurt on a Stick]

what do you mean ? yoghurt

 

I reflected back on my initial response and decided that it was a little offensive. So, I went back in and deleted it.

[the_hedge]

"Lovely boys the Kray's"

 

Say that to all the shopkeepers who had to pay protection for years.

Edited September 21, 2015 by the_hedge